Chica learns something new

Every day, around 4 pm, Chica could be found at the window of her room. She would be in for about an hour and when she came out, she would be in a very funny mood. Her mother was perplexed at this and one day decided to go down to the root of this mystery.

So one day when Chica was, as usual at the window, her mother, entered Chica’s room and peeked out of the window too. When Chica saw this, she quickly turned her face, but not before the game was up!

“Chica, why do you sit here every day?” mama asked. Chica didn’t want to reply, but had to reply to her mother and said “Mama, I want to learn how to ride a bike like these girls there”. “So what’s stopping you?” replied mama. “I’ve heard you fall when you learn to ride, so I am scared”, this from a scared Chica.

“Nonsense” countered mama, “Yes, you will fall down a couple of times while learning to ride a bike, but that is part and parcel of the learning process. If you have the will to learn, you will learn”.

So Chica decided to start learning to ride a bike. The next day, she went down when she saw the girls riding their bikes and asked them to help her learn. The girls were happy to teach her and with so many teachers around her, Chica quickly learnt to ride. Of course, she did fall a few times, but remembered what her mama told her and didn’t bother too much about that.

A week after Chica had learnt to ride a bike, there was a surprise waiting for her – a pink, shiny new bicycle just for her. Chica was overjoyed and soon was happily playing on the bike with all her new friends!

Random Thoughts

Today has been one of these days – one where I am not in a mood to do anything! It’s surprising, considering that I woke up with energy and even coming in to work was good – no sleeping in the bus. Dunno what happened to me at work, here I am at lunch, just waiting for the day to end…

Yesterday BB’s co-form teacher Mr. M called me with a complaint about him. Now BB has appalling handwriting and I’ve been on his back for the last 3 years, but it’s not working. The reason Mr. M called was because they have their final oral exams from today and today is the composition paper. So he was asked to write a composition for Mr. M to grade him last week. He did write it, but his writing was so bad that Mr. M asked him to copy it to a fresh page neatly. BB forgot to do it over the weekend and when Mr. M asked him to do it during recess, he refused. So when he called me letting me know about this, I was embarrased, angry and mortified! So I asked Mr. M to keep him after school (one of the options he gave me) and asked S who was at home yesterday to pick him up about 30 minutes after school ended.

Writing this blog has been one of the best things that has happened in my life recently. I feel energised when I write and after starting the Chiki and Chica series for BB & GG, everything I see or hear around me is material for a story. I really want to write stories for children, don’t know why, but in all my forays into writing, it’s always been something for children, never adults. So I took a huge step and sent an email to a local publisher who specialises in children’s books. I asked them if they want to see my writings and even if they don’t want to publish me, can they critique my work so that I can improve on it. They may not even reply, but let’s hope and wait and watch…Watch this space for more news…

As You Sow, So Shall You Reap – A Chiki and Chica Story

One day when Chika and Chica reached school, they found the whole school abuzz with some exciting news. The king of Rhysunds, the forest where they lived was going to come to their school’s annual prize distribution and was going to give a special prize for a very special competition. This competition was a story-writing competition to commemorate the golden jubilee year of their school as the school was now 50 years old! There were very cool prizes to be won and the best one was a special plane ride with the King himself in his Majesty’s airplane. Now, his Majesty King Rivas had a very special airplane which Chiki had only seen from a distance and a chance of actully going inside the plane for a ride was too much of a temptation for him. “I’m going to write the best story that anyone can write and i will win this competition, you just wait and watch” Chiki told Chica, his friends, his teachers and anyone who spoke to him that day.

Later in the day when the teacher spoke about the competition, she told them the deadline which was a week from that day. The stories had to be written neatly on a paper and handed over along with the submission form. Saying this she passed along the submission forms to all the students asking them all to take part and even if they didn’t win, the experience would stand then in good stead.

Chiki took the form and went home, not before telling the bus Aunty and the canteen uncle his plans. Once home, he told his mother, “Mama, tonight after dinner, I will go to my room and start working on my story, so don’t disturb me. I am going to write such a wonderful story that his Majesty will have to give me the first prize”

After dinner, Chiki did go his room to think about his story. “My story has to be different and wonderful, so that I win the competition” “i wonder how the plane will look when I enter it?” “I hope I don’t become sick in the plane when I enter it” thoughts like this kept coming to his mind and all thoughts of the competition flew out as he fantasised on what he would do with the king once he won the competition and got to ride the plane. He soon fell asleep and when he woke up the next day he consoled himself that he still had six days in which to write out the story.

“Chiki, have you completed your story?” mama asked him once he was back from school the next day. “No mama, I will think out my story today and write it up later” Chiki replied and as soon as he finished his homework and dinner, he went to his room to work on his story. He did think of a wonderful story, one that involved airplanes, dinosaurs, race cars and everything that a boy could dream about. The next day, he excitedly went to his sister ad asked her if she had finished her story. “No Chiki, I am still working on it”, Chica replied, but I just can’t seem to get story to have a good ending”. “Show it to me Chica, maybe I can help” offered Chiki and he gave his sister the perfect ending to her story.

The next few days flew by with homework, swimming and the myriad other classes that Chica and Chiki went to and every day Chica and his mother would ask him about the story and Chiki would reply “I will write it down tomorrow, I promise”. The day before the children had to submit the story, their teacher reminded them about the deadline the next day and asked them all the make sure they had neatly written their story and filled up the submission form that went with it. The forms needed to have their parent’s signature in it too.

Chica and Chiki went home and made sure their mama signed the forms for both of them. Chica then asked Chiki if he had finished writing his story. Chiki had loads of homework that day, so he said he will do it once the homework is done. Later that night, once the homework was complete, Chiki started to write his story. But he was very tired and it was late and soon he was asleep with the story half done. The next morning he woke up and frantically started writing the story, but because he was in a hurry, his handwriting was extremely bad and he missed writing out many points in his story.

All the children submitted their stories to the teachers, but Chiki knew that he had not done justice to his story. He also had doubts if he will eventually win the competition. The next few days till the results were in were nailbiting for the whole school. During recess, this was the only topic of discussion between the children. Everywhere they went, it was the competition – at school, in the bus, at the supermarket, at the gym – everywhere! Soon this also percolated down to the parents and they too got sucked into ‘The Discussion’.

At last the day of the results arrived. The King arrived at the school for the annual prize distribution and Head of the school went up to the stage. “We have had a lot of very interesting stories for our competition. In fact, there was one story which started out very well, but around the halfway point, we could not make out what the author wanted to say. Anyway, in a competition, there will be just winner, so the winner is….Chica!” Chiki was very happy for his sister, but also very, very sad that he did not win the competition. Of course, he knew the head of the school was refering to him, but there was nothing he could do at this point.


Chica went up to the stage to receive the award from His Majesty. Once there, she whispered something into his ears and His Majesty smiled and nodded. Then he took the microphone and made an announcement “I just heard that there is a little boy who so desperately wanted to have a ride in my new plane, that he made up a fantastic story, but unfortunately, he did not finish his work on time, so could not win. Chica would like her brother Chiki to have the ride in the plane instead of her as he helped her with the ending of her story and also because although he did think of a wonderful story, he could not finish writing it. Can Chiki come up on the stage now?” Chiki very self consciously went up to the stage and the king continued speaking, “Because Chica so generously decided to give up her prize for Chiki, I will take both the children with me on the plane”.

Chica, Chiki and their parents were thrilled to hear about the King’s offer. A week weeks later, a big car came to take the chilren to the airport where the King was waiting to take them on a spin in his new airplane. Chiki and chica enjoyed the trip. At the end they were showered with gifts by the King and went home happy.

Chiki vowed that in the future, he will never do things at the last minute and will always make aure that he has ample time to finish his work.

Chica and Chiki learn a lesson

Last night GG wanted me to tell her a story and this is what I came up with. This is a the retelling of an old story which probably everyone has heard of atleast once. For me, this was one of the stories which my paternal grandmother (‘ammama’ as I called her) used to tell me a long time ago.

Chica and Chiki learn a lesson

Once upon a time, in a forest bordered by rivers and beautiful lakes, lived two monkeys – Chica and Chiki with their parents and friends. Chica was a girl monkey and Chiki, a boy monkey and they loved to play together. They went to the jungle school with all their other animal friends.

One day, Chiki found a huge piece of puri which was left by some picnickers. He had never seen something like this before, it was that huge! He quickly picked it up before anyone else could and ran to show it to his sister. Chica marvelled at the size of the puri and wanted to have a bite of it. They then decided to divide it into two so that both could get an equal piece.

“I will divide it into two halves since I was the one who found it” Chiki said as he took the puri into his hands to break it into two. “Noooo!”, shouted Chica, “you will not divide it into two exact pieces, but will take the larger piece for yourself”, she cried. Chiki could not take this accusation lying down and started fighting with his sister about how she was the one who would take the larger piece should she be the one who gets to divide the puri. This went on for a while and all this time, the poor puri was uneaten.

Finally unable to bear her hunger pangs any longer, Chica suggested they walk down the path and the first person they saw would be the arbitrator in this argument and that person would be the one who would divide the puri into half. So they walked on a path that led them home. When they had walked a while, they came across a black hare. “The hare looks honest”, though Chica and looked at her brother. He seemed to know what she was thinking (as he would as Chica and Chiki were twins) and decided to ask the hare if he would divide the puri for them.

“Mr. Hare, we have a small problem here”, Chica said “and we wanted to ask if you would like to help us solve it”. The hare had, in the meantime, had spotted the puri in Chiki’s hands and was drooling as he had not had lunch that day and was very hungry. He forced himself to look at Chiki and listen to what he was saying. “Sure little monkey, I will be glad to help you solve your problem. How can I help you?”.

“Mr. Hare, can you divide this puri into exactly two halves so that both me and my sister can have equal pieces?” asked Chiki. Mr. Hare said he would be glad to do the job and took the puri from Chiki to cut it up. He cut it into two pieces and held it out to Chiki. Then suddenly he stopped and said, “Oh, I think one piece is slightly smaller than the other, let me cut it up a bit so that both are the same”, saying this he took a small bite from the larger piece. He then held it out to Chiki and Chica and once again said one piece was smaller than the other and took a bite to make them equal. This went on another three times when he was finally satisfied that both pieces were exactly alike.

When he gave the pieces to Chiki and Chica, they took it back with such an expression on their faces, that it needed to be seen to be believed! That was because the once huge puri has become two tiny pieces. Chica and Chiki had no choice but to accept the pieces from Mr. Hare as they had decided they would accept the verdict of the person they met and that was Mr. Hare. They popped the pieces into their mouths and left from there without a word. Mr. Hare, on the other hand, gave a nice long burp of satisfaction as his hunger was now over and he was full.

Chiki and Chica now walked back home, feeling sorry for themselves. When they reached home and told their mama the story, she just laughed and said, “serves you both monkey right. You did not trust each other, were greedy and in the process a third person took advantage of you.” With heads low, Chica and Chiki vowed never to be greedy and to always trust each other so that noone can take advantage of them ever again. They had learnt their lesson – and how!